Lost Narrative Poetry

In the end, Xia Ran did not release the audio, but generously deleted it.

This made Zaimokuza Yoshiki feel that he had finally survived. After all, he also had his own bottom line. Don't look at how he could speak such chuunier-arrogant words without any shame when he faced Hikigaya before. Come……

However, Xia Ran's behavior hit him extremely accurately.

After all, let alone those shameful chuunibang lines, even if they are spoken normally, most people would not think there is any problem, but if someone suddenly wants to record it and prepares to publicize it, …

Maybe you can’t accept it at all, and you’ll feel angry and anxious, right?

As for what the difference is, it’s really hard to explain for a while. It’s probably the difference between wearing a swimsuit and wearing underwear. They both have the same effect, are made of the same fabric, and cover the same area. I can’t live in several places on my body.

However, the former can be openly seen by others, while the latter seems to be so ashamed and angry if someone accidentally sees it, that they can't wait to find a crack in the ground to crawl under... As for what is the essential difference between them? It's really a problem.

However, Xia Ran was not really showing kindness, she just pretended to delete it——

This is not to say that he has deleted the audio on the surface, but in fact he still has such a handle, but because his illusion skills have not yet revealed the innate expertise that is effective on the machine, and there is no way to import the forged voice into the mobile phone, turning it into Audio that really exists.

That's right, he actually didn't record it at all, and there was no need for it. He just used illusions to make everyone present have some specific auditory hallucinations.

Because his perception is very high, the words he heard before were also very clear, and there was nothing missing. And because his intelligence attribute is also very high, even if he didn't deliberately memorize it, he could completely remember every punctuation mark that Zaimokuza Yoshiki just said just once.

By slightly changing the soft sound technique and reversing the direction, you can turn the elimination of sound into the creation of sound——

After all, strictly speaking, this is not a self-created skill, nor is it a modification, because in the illusion system, eliminating or creating sounds at the level of sensory perception is completely the most basic thing.

The effect is no different from the recording. Theoretically speaking, everyone just relived Xia Ran's previous feelings, auditory hallucinations appeared on the auditory level, and relived the feelings of the words he heard before.

Xia Ran also felt that maybe he was really talented in the mental and spiritual aspects. He could figure out some things by just reading books, and he could also make good use of the spell characteristics he had mastered and use them according to local conditions.

It is not a simple mechanical control, rigid application, as immutable as game data, and it will always have the same effect.

Of course, this is probably because his related attributes are all very high now. As a person who is determined to take the path of a legal practitioner, his three basic attributes of intelligence, spirit, and perception are all at a level of 40+.

This is almost a very stable equilateral triangle, with each side supporting each other, allowing the ability value range represented by each attribute to be better exerted.

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Five minutes later.

In the center of the activity room of the service department, several tables were moved out and arranged into a long table. Natsu Ran, Yukinoshita, Hikigaya and Yuigahama occupied the four corners of the rectangle and sat opposite each other.

"He is Zaimokuza Yoshiteru. I have introduced him before...the guy who is with me in every physical education class."

Hikigaya looked at the gray-white figure squatting and drawing circles in the corner near the window, and said with a look of disgust, explaining to Xia Ran the purpose of this guy Zaimokuza.

"He wrote a light novel. It's the manuscript you have. I originally wanted to submit it directly. I think he was planning to participate in some newcomer award, right? But because I didn't have any friends, I couldn't hear everyone's thoughts, so I found it. Ministry wants to see other people’s opinions.”

The guy Hikigaya was talking about was squatting in the corner by the window with his back to everyone, drawing circles, leaving only a lonely figure behind.

Probably because of the ruthless heart attack he had just received, he has become taciturn now, and no longer makes that pretentious and heroic laugh, but tries to reduce his sense of existence as much as possible.

"That's right..." Xia Ran nodded and didn't express any opinions immediately. He just quickly turned over the manuscript of the novel in his hand.

Although it wasn't like turning the pages of a book in the breeze, just flipping through it with a splash, but the speed was also extremely fast. Basically, each page was turned over immediately without stopping for more than ten seconds.

It's not like reading a book, but more like checking whether the homework is done. It doesn't matter what the specific content is, as long as there is content.

Others didn't pay too much attention when they saw it. This kind of behavior was normal. They had circulated the manuscript of the novel not long ago, but they just flipped through it like this... After all, it was a light novel, not a micro-novel. .

The size of the manuscript paper used is also forty-two by thirty-four. It is such a thick stack and densely written. Of course, it cannot be read in a short while.

"We are going to make a few copies of the original manuscript of the novel. After we go back tonight, everyone will read it first and then wait until tomorrow to share their opinions..."

Yukinoshita was sitting opposite Xia Ran. After seeing the latter put down the manuscript of the novel, she reached out and took it over, flipped through it, and said calmly, putting forward her own opinions.

"Xia Ran, you should be more experienced in this area. If you have any suggestions, you can also tell me... It doesn't matter if you say it more directly. Since he has the courage to come to you, he must be ready to accept criticism. Be mentally prepared.”

"That's right! That's it! I am the swordsman general Saikiza Yoshiki. I have never lacked courage, and naturally I will not be afraid... afraid of facing challenges..."

The boy by the window seemed to become excited all of a sudden. He stood up immediately, waved his arms to everyone and shouted so, his coat crackling with the wind outside the window.

However, when he saw Xia Ran glance at him, he immediately trembled subconsciously, his voice suddenly became softer, and he had to say the last few words.

stare……

Under everyone's emotionless gaze, he retreated back to the corner and squatted down to draw circles.

This chuuni disease has penetrated the brain so deeply that it is probably hopeless. It seems that saying some chuuni lines has become this person's instinctive reaction.

Xia Ran couldn't help but sigh, what could be done? Even if he had caused a psychological shadow on the other party, it was impossible for the shadow area to cover up the soul of the second class that had been in the past for many years!

"Speaking of which, what does General Sword Hao mean?" He asked casually without caring.

At this time, Hikigaya opened his mouth to explain:

"It's like this, Xia Ran-san, the character basis this guy set for himself seems to be Ashikaga Yoshiteru, the 13th shogun of the Muromachi shogunate. Since their names are the same, they may find it easier to conceive this way."

"Ashikaga Yoshiteru?"

"Yeah, that's not bad. Although it's annoying that he keeps citing history, at least he based his settings on past history, so it's a little better." Hikigaya sighed with a look of regret on his face. With.

"Huh? If that's the case, what is your setting like, Hikigaya? Isn't it based on past history?"

Xia Ran suddenly became interested and narrowed his eyes slightly.

"Of course not. My setting is that there were once seven gods in this world, namely the three pillar gods belonging to the god of creation, the three pillar gods belonging to the god of destruction, and the "nameless god" who is permanently in debt. They have caused the world to cycle through booms and busts, and it is currently in its seventh cycle. "

Hikigaya Hachiman blurted out without even thinking -

"In order to prevent the world from ending again, the government is looking for the reincarnations of these seven gods everywhere. The most important among them, the eternal debtor god whose ability is still unknown, is me..."

He suddenly stopped and smacked his lips as if something was wrong...Wait, was he being lied to?

I shouldn't be such a careless person, why does this person's words seem to have some kind of magic power? Before, it was Yuigahama's dark cuisine, and now it's this dark history.

The boy with dead fish eyes subconsciously looked to the side and found that the harmless-looking boy had just put down his mobile phone, as if he had just finished recording...

Damn it! Is this person poisonous? !

Ever since, there was one more person squatting and drawing circles in the corner, Hikigaya silently squatting side by side with Zaimokuza...

It was clear that he was still despising a member of Chuunibyou just now, but now he suddenly became a despised member... During this process, what happened because of what happened, so that he became like this? Woolen cloth?

He couldn't figure it out for a while. He didn't even know who he was, where he came from, and where he was going...

"What a devil..." Yukinoshita sighed, looking at Xia Ran and making such a comment.

Yuigahama Yui seemed to agree very much, and she seemed to be frightened by Xia Ran. When she saw the latter's gaze, she immediately turned her head hurriedly, looked out the window and hummed a song, pretending to be He looked fine, but there was cold sweat on his forehead.

"Ah hahahaha... Actually, I'm not that powerful..." Xia Ran stretched out her hand to touch the back of her head in embarrassment, looking ashamed.

"Which word do you think I just said was a compliment to you?" Yukinoshita didn't want to talk to this guy. If Zaimokuza Yoshiki answered the question incorrectly, he was not on the same channel at all, making it difficult for people to communicate.

Then this guy is just pretending to be stupid and deliberately misinterpreting other people's meaning. Although he can communicate, it takes more effort.

"Let's talk about Zaimuza's novel..."

Xia Ran didn't argue, and simply crossed her arms in front of her chest, acting like a professional.

"Zamokuza, is it about the theme of campus superpower battles? I just read it, and the routine is relatively old-fashioned. It uses a certain city in Japan as the stage to describe the mysterious organization and superpowers who have memories of past lives. Gods appear and appear in the night, and then an ordinary teenage protagonist discovers the power hidden within himself and defeats his enemies one after another."

"Uh...yes, yes." Zaimuzhao, who was drawing circles in the corner, raised his head.

"It's not entirely a bad thing that the routines are old-fashioned, but you must first write correct sentences so that people don't find it difficult to read. Basically half of them are inverted sentences..." Xia Ran continued.

"Huh? Oh oh..." Zaimuza responded somewhat at a loss.

"Also, the narrative sentences are too long, and there are too many difficult words that are difficult to read. As for the plot development, I can only say that it is too fast. You should not use three natural paragraphs to write twenty chapters."

Xia Ran expressed her thoughts calmly: "For example, at the end of Chapter 3, I don't understand why the heroine suddenly took off her clothes..."

"Wait, Xia Ran-san, what are you talking about...?" Yukinoshita frowned and interrupted his evaluation.

"Huh? Isn't it obvious at a glance? Let me express my thoughts!" Xia Ran didn't know why.

"You just watched it for a few minutes, right?"

"But I've read them all!"

(PS: Blind date... I don’t know what I am doing all day today... Wow! It’s so annoying, why haven’t I traveled through time...)