My Daily Cultivation Life with a Clumsy Female Disciple

Written in front: This chapter is the author’s random thoughts and rants, please be careful

It’s a new book for a newbie, and I’ve finally written a million words, which feels very amazing. It's like climbing a steep and high mountain. When you stand at the foot of the mountain and look at it, you will feel afraid and then shrink back. But you muster up the courage to take one step forward, one step towards the mountain, one step after another, and keep walking. Suddenly I found myself climbing so high. It's this amazing feeling.

How did this book begin? An idea came to my mind. It would be interesting to write a story about falling in love in the world of immortality. Let the monks who moved mountains and reclaimed seas and changed their lives against the will of heaven talk about an ordinary and ordinary love. Let the ordinary monks talk about ordinary love and survive in the world of immortality. Then I wrote the beginning and showed it to the editor. The editor said that he was looking forward to it, so he started writing.

Therefore, this book first came up with an idea, and then slowly added things to this idea: the ordinary relationship between men and women is not interesting, and some taboos and ethics must be added to it. It can be a senior brother and a junior sister, but it is not necessary. Master and apprentice are obviously more It’s interesting; the male and female protagonists can be casual and plain, but not interesting enough. There must be things that should be in the world of immortality, geniuses, mediocre people, classic sect competitions, dark jungle laws, and dangerous murders. There are treasures, and the male and female protagonists can live in peace for a long time, but the big events that should happen in the world of immortality have to be there; the male and female protagonists have to have some interaction, so there is a mature and steady shady master and a carefree genius idiot.

Yes, I just add to it as I write. If I think it’s interesting, I’ll add it to the book. If I think it can be added, I’ll add it. Finally it became what it is now.

Everyone enjoyed watching most of the plots, but there were still some plots that made everyone uncomfortable. Especially the sword-making section. It is roughly estimated that this plot has lost one-third of the readers of this book. Here are some thoughts about those that are available and not available.

There are things that can be said about the sword-forging section, and there are things that can't be said at all. What I can’t say is that when I looked back at the plot myself, I felt that it was a bit too majestic and the plot was a bit rough. What I can say, or I can make excuses for, is that when I first started writing this book, I never thought that many people would read it. I thought it would only be read by one friend and one or two new friends. , I didn’t expect more than ten people to read this book, so I wrote it quite casually. Just write whatever you find interesting, regardless of whether the plot makes sense or not. A middle-class loli snake is interesting, so don’t kill it. The protagonist will kill it, but the author said, no, you don’t want to kill it. Camping, it's interesting, let the brother-in-law come and see the misunderstanding, it's interesting, then don't think too much, just write it hard, the protagonist said I am not that kind of person, the author said, no, you are. The heroine shouted "Starlight, blast them", it was a joke, it was interesting, the Holy Mother or something, what is that? The author didn't think that much.

Another thing that can be said is, (serious expression), this plot is called Sword Making, where the heroine makes a sword in her hands and a sword in her heart. The sword in her hand is her natal sword, a tangible sword; the sword in her heart is an invisible sword that requires her to learn the way of survival in the spiritual world. This is a pampered young lady who is fifteen or sixteen years old. There is a process for turning her into a swordsman with powerful swords. Put another way, what are modern girls of fifteen or sixteen doing? In the third year of junior high school and the first year of high school, when they are studying, it is not easy for them to kill people with swords.

In addition to this, there are also many people who accuse the heroine of being stupid, like an idiot, and needing a male bishop for everything. Regarding this, what I want to say is, if the heroine is scheming, smart, calm, and decisive from the beginning, what should the male protagonist do?

There are also those who accuse the male protagonist of being insidious and sleazy, and of being afraid of heights, which is a bit... whether he is stubborn or steady, he is playing on Li Changshou's jokes, and if he is afraid of heights, he is playing on Song Shuhang's jokes. I thought it was funny, so I added it, but the reader seriously said it was poisonous, so I didn’t know what to say. In fact, except for the obscenity aspect, which I wrote seriously, the fear of heights was purely for fun and had no impact on the plot at all.

There are also those who accuse the male protagonist of being a dog licker and the female protagonist of being a virgin. There is a place where the comment section is full of this kind of thing, which makes me feel sad. Starting from the character of Qin Ran, my character setting for him is that he may never have imagined that he would be scolded as a dog licker... What I can say is that whether it is this book or my personal experience, Never look at what a person does on the surface. Don't listen to what a person says, look to what he does and what his purpose is. For someone like Qin Ran, his initial kindness to Li Shiyin obviously had impure motives. If, if Li Shiyin doesn't

With this kind of naive character, I also hinted at what it would be like if Tian Wenjin became Qin Ran's disciple... When Qin Ran killed people, he didn't even frown.

There are also some things that are represented by the world view of other worlds... There is Qi training before foundation building, there is agility and bigu after foundation building, there are things about combining Tao and returning to the void, or what the status of an alchemist in the world of practice is originally. What is a qualified sect leader, head, parent, etc., or something else.

Of course, besides those who criticized it, there were more people who liked this book. This surprised me. It is really a surprise and honor that people like what I write.

Some said the logic of the plot was good, some said the rhythm was comfortable, some said the story was light and soothing, and some said it was sweet... In short, you are really good and you can always find the good points in this story. You guys really... I cried to death!

In fact, I know that the writing is not good. The writing style is immature and the plot is rough. It is your strong tolerance and excellent understanding ability that found some interesting points and advantages for it, and then read on. I am very touched.

Specially, I read some readers' comments and felt that they could be regarded as bosom friends and teachers. He said that the rhythm of this story is good, it is plain when it should be plain, and compact when it should be compact; he said that the core of this story is good, and it describes the appearance of ordinary people and ordinary monks under the background of the times and natural disasters and man-made disasters; he said that the characters are well-shaped, there are geniuses competing for the top, and ordinary monks struggling in the world of cultivation; he said that the real mentality of the time traveler is written; he said that what should be done after the time travel is written, and so on. There are many very attentive and good friends.

How to say it? I blush a little. Because I really want to write what you say, but because of my poor writing, lack of ideological realm and life experience, these things are not written clearly. In other words, I am just thinking about writing this way and working towards this direction. I have only written some hazy things, and your wisdom has seen my little thoughts.

The above are some answers from the authors to everyone's evaluation of this book. In fact, whether it is good or bad, praised or scolded, I have quietly read them. Except for those who scold people for no reason and purely vent their emotions, most of the scolding, although I am very unhappy, I actually know that it is the problem of this book. So I still want to thank them. Without them (they, because they probably can't see this) pointing out, I wouldn't know those problems. Just like I never expected that someone like me would write a virgin heroine.

Then you need to pay attention to the fact that this is not a book about fighting monsters and leveling up, it is not about walking through the unfolded map, and it is not about letting the hero and heroine reach the top of the world. Many friends have said that this is a romance. When will the romance end? When the hero and heroine get married. So... you know.

Finally, I am very happy that someone reads this book. I hope you are happy when reading it and happy in life. There is no doubt that I will work hard to learn and make your experience positive.

Love you! Here I wish you a happy new year! !

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