Pirate Family

This is actually the first step of Mengxin's work. At the beginning, I thought it was fun, so I took the draft I wrote a few years ago, changed it and uploaded it. So some readers can see that the style of the first few pages of this book is different from the style of the back.

I didn't expect to sign the contract right away. Since I signed the contract, I have the responsibility. I used to hate eunuchs the most. So I will never become the kind of person I hate the most, even if my grades are not good, I will stick to it.

The next step is to change the setting and write the outline. You can probably see from my book that my writing style is very immature compared with many authors, so it is understandable that the results are not as good as it is, but from the beginning Up to now, I have not deleted a single comment. I will read every reader's comment carefully, and I will think about their criticism.

For example, at the beginning, some readers pointed out that the armed color domineering has no color.

I immediately flipped through the manga, from the war on the top to the cake island chapter, most of the domineering users of armed colors that appeared were represented by pitch black.

But when Rayleigh trained Luffy, he did use the words "armed domineering is an invisible armor covering a person" to describe it. He, as well as a strong man like Garp, had never used the dark armed domineering color.

So I was thinking at the time that the appearance of armed domineering was during the war on the top, how should wt fill in the pitfalls of Garp's "Iron Fist of Love" in the early stage, and whether there will be a higher-level invisible domineering.

So I was a little willful and didn't change it.

Sure enough, "Ryu Sakura" appeared in Wano Country Chapter.

In addition, some readers pointed out that if you eat the devil fruit, you will know the effect.

Regarding this point, I really read the comics. When it comes to eating devil fruits, I first thought of the two agents in the Seven Waters Chapter, so I read the comics and found that they did use

"I don't know what this ability is, but I'll know after a while."

To describe it in this way, it is boldly assumed that people cannot directly know their own abilities after eating a devil fruit, which is convenient for the number of words (crossed out).

But I didn't expect it to arouse the disgust of so many readers. I thought about it and downplayed this setting.

Regarding the ink that many readers said I wrote, I tried to improve it, but the effect was not obvious. Because I like to make everything clear. And in the middle and late stages, I accelerated the plot of each episode appropriately (self-feeling).

However, after all, this is a solution to the symptoms rather than the root cause, unless I push the previous plot to a new one. At my current speed, very slow to do this.

So I decided that after I finish writing this book, I will definitely think about the plot of the next book before starting to write (if I continue to write).

Let’s talk about why the protagonist’s ability is set as “perception fruit”. Actually, when I was watching “Dragon Ball Super”, I saw Wukong’s state of “Extreme Instinct” and sighed directly, this damn, isn’t it Are you domineering?

But Jiyi Wukong is really handsome, so I can't help but write.

But when I really started to set it, I found that "Extreme Instinct" is too buggy in One Piece World. The body automatically defends against attacks, so that the protagonist can have a strong combat power from the beginning, so it can't be written like this.

So hack hack hack! The protagonist's ability is set as the fruit of perception, and because of the super perception, it is difficult for the protagonist to practice knowledge and arrogance. Until now, the protagonist's "death" form has not been met with everyone.

In fact, in the early stage, I was arrogant and wrote a lot of pitfalls, thinking that if there are pitfalls, I should not dig the author, but until now, I found that many plots exceeded my ability. I can only try to close it as much as possible.

Now that the plot has entered the middle and late stages, I have also begun to conceive the next book. I will try to speed up the coding.

correct! Another thing is that I was blocked for a few chapters because of the huang ban some time ago, and they haven't been released yet, and I'm still revising them.

But I really don't know where the yellow is written!

In the middle of the night, the nonsense is written here. Good night!