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Chapter 19 Golden Chapter Three

Standing at the front desk of the Internet cafe, Chen Li hesitated for a few minutes. Finally, he gritted his teeth and applied for a membership card in this Internet cafe and recharged it with 500 yuan.

In order to get rich from writing, he also spent a lot of money.

He doesn't have a computer himself, so if he wants to write online novels, he has to come to an Internet cafe.

And I have to come every day, and the time every day is not short.

Calculating it this way, it is certainly more cost-effective to apply for a membership card.

With a 20% discount, you can save some money.

I originally wanted to top up a thousand yuan, because it was more cost-effective to top up a thousand yuan and get five hundred yuan.

But I really couldn't get that much money out of my hands, so I could only top up with five hundred.

Recharge 500 and get 200 free, which can also save some money.

After taking out these five hundred, he only had a few dozen dollars left in his hand.

He has only been working for a few months, and his monthly salary is only eight or nine hundred yuan. Then he also bought a mobile phone, and now he can earn five hundred yuan. This is the result of his frugality.

Fortunately, wages will be paid in a few days, and the few dozen dollars left on hand can be used to survive.

After doing this, I felt that my health bar was empty, and I said to Yan Xin: "I have staked all my wealth on it."

Yan Xin encouraged him: "I can see that you are a person who can do great things. It is God's law that people like you will not succeed!"

Yan Xin didn't apply for a card. He only has a hundred yuan left now. His salary won't be paid until the 15th of next month. This hundred yuan will last for more than thirty days, but now he doesn't dare to spend a penny.

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This time he came here just to see how Chen Li writes.

The first few chapters of an online novel are very important. If the beginning is useless, it will be difficult to attract readers later.

Such a good idea cannot be wasted by Chen Li.

I didn't just write a line, just read it one by one, and then give my own opinions.

No author can withstand such scrutiny, which will directly cause a person's mentality to collapse.

And if you look at it section by section, you can’t see any good news.

Let Chen Li write a chapter first, and then see how he writes and whether he can publish it.

Chen Li initially wanted to use his original author account to publish new books, but Yan Xin rejected it:

"Your original account has a eunuch book. If you want that account to issue a book, doesn't it tell readers that you are a eunuch? Eunuchs hurt your character, so you should use a new account."

Chen Li explained: "Although my book is a eunuch, it still has more than a thousand collections. Using that account to distribute the book can attract the original readers."

Yan Xin curled his lips: "More than a thousand collections are brought by eunuch books. How high a conversion value can you expect? Compared with the negative value that the eunuch label brings to you, that little benefit is not worth mentioning.

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He was embarrassed to say it.

Is it considered dear to have more than a thousand collections?

He has also seen the collection of old books exceed 100,000, but the author has been publishing new books for ten days, and the collection has not exceeded 500.

What’s there to care about in the collection of more than a thousand eunuch books?

Haha!

Under his suggestion, Chen Li finally decided to open a new account, with the pseudonym Elbow Stewed Potatoes.

"Having such a pen name can make others think you are a foodie and increase your affinity," Yan Xin said.

In fact, of course it sucks the luck of those who come after you.

This is metaphysics.

As for the title of the book, he gave Chen Li two choices, one was "Fights to Break the Sky" and the other was "Fights to Break the Universe".

Chen Li chose "Fights Break the Sphere": "This name is more domineering."

"I respect your choice." Yan Xin said with a smile.

At this time, I wish I could record a video and keep it as evidence - everyone has seen it, this is his choice, it has nothing to do with me!

Suddenly I no longer feel guilty about plagiarism.

From his point of view, plagiarism is of course bad, but the person who wrote it is Chen Li, so what does it have to do with Yan Xin and me? I just told him this story.

From Chen Li's perspective, I just wrote out the ideas provided by Yan Xin. That's called cooperation. How can it be called plagiarism?

Under this cooperative model, a world in which only Little Potato is harmed is achieved.

When Chen Li started writing, Yan Xin did not follow him to watch, but went outside for a walk for more than half an hour.

The air in the Internet cafe is so bad that I can't stand it for a long time.

After returning from a stroll, Chen Li had already finished the first chapter - "The Fallen Genius".

The first line is still the same:

"Strength of fighting, third stage!"

This first sentence is a sentence that Yan Xin repeatedly told Chen Li to add.

Without this sentence, could "Fights Break the Sphere" still be called "Fights Break the Sphere"?

Just like without the sentence "**'s high school grades are not ideal", the landlady would be soulless.

This is metaphysics, and it is also related to luck, so it must be added.

The next content, the plot is still the one he provided. The once genius boy of the Xiao family turned into a loser. He was humiliated and ridiculed during the family test.

Later on came the protagonist's childhood sweetheart's cousin, and a genius girl living in the Xiao family.

Their names were all given by Chen Li, the cousin's surname was Shangguan, and the genius girl's surname was Murong.

Seeing this, Yan Xin glanced at Chen Li and thought to himself:

"You can tell from the compound surname that this guy really grew up reading martial arts novels."

Forget it, it doesn't matter.

At least this cousin's surname is Shangguan, not Xiao like the protagonist. For this reason, it deserves recognition.

The text is definitely different from the original work, but the plot direction and the order of characters appearing are the same.

After all, these things are provided by Yan Xin.

Just looking at it, I felt something was not quite right.

After reading it once and then re-reading it, I found a problem and moved it with the mouse:

"Brother Li, look at the few paragraphs you've written here. You actually used two to three hundred words to describe the environment. This is not good!"

Chen Li: "Huh? Is my description of the environment okay?"

Yan Xin said: "It's not a question of whether it's possible or not. I admit that you described the environment very well and in detail, but it's not necessary."

"I think describing the environment in more detail will give readers an immersive feeling," Chen Li explained.

"Most readers don't need this feeling," Yan Xin said. "This is an online novel. It doesn't require immersive reading, so it doesn't require immersive description. Writing what readers like to read is the most important thing."

The rest of the description, no matter how excellent, is redundant."

Chen Li fell silent, thinking about his words.

"And the first few chapters are very important. You are a newcomer who has no works to prove yourself. Readers will have no patience with you. You must quickly get to the topic and write out the selling points of the novel. Only in this way can you catch them and make them interested.

Interested in continuing to read.”

After Yan Xin finished speaking, he paused and then said:

"Think about it, when I talk to you about this story, if I first tell you about the environment of the Xiao family, what the layout of the courtyard is like, and a lot of gibberish, you will think that this story has a beginning.

? The first three chapters, let me call them the golden three chapters. Within these three chapters, you must write out all the selling points. Different from this core appeal, all descriptions are invalid and must be deleted.

!”

"That's what happened..." Chen Li murmured.

Suddenly he seemed to have an epiphany, and a smile appeared on his face:

"It has to be you! If you don't point it out, I can't figure out why my grades are so bad. If someone like you writes a novel, it will definitely become a hit."

Yan Xin curled his lips and thought to himself: "I can only speak."

However, he did not deny it.

It's not a bad thing for Chen Li to have such an idea.

Thanks for the big reward.

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