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Chapter 21 This guy is too hardworking

Chen Li finished the first chapter and started writing the second chapter.

Yan Xin had already talked with him about the content of the second chapter. When he was at work during the day, he was thinking about how to write it, and he already had the details in mind.

At this moment, it’s just about expressing in words what has been brewing, so it’s not that difficult.

In the first chapter, he has not changed his bad habit of writing novels, so there are many things that need to be revised.

When I was writing the second chapter, I didn't do any superfluous things, I just used the simplest words to express what I wanted to express, and the writing was particularly smooth.

The keyboard clicked loudly as he pressed it, and in less than an hour, he coded out the second chapter, a total of more than 3,000 words.

Then let Yan Xin check to see if there is any problem.

There were not so many people in the Internet cafe at this time, and there were a lot of empty seats. Yan Xin sat next to him and slept on the table for more than half an hour.

I was woken up by him, rubbed my face, and checked the contents again.

After reading it once, I gave a thumbs up:

"Yes, this chapter is very well written. It seems that what you lack is not writing ability, but a correct thinking about online writing."

In this chapter, Chen Li writes the emotions of the protagonist very well. He has the confusion of traveling to this different world, the depression after being ridiculed, and the passionate young man who refuses to admit defeat and accept his fate. The person who entrusted Yan Xin to him

The design is well drawn and has a full sense of immersion.

The setting of Dou Qi Continent is also not too slow, allowing readers to understand the world view of this novel without feeling lengthy and boring.

The last fragment was also specially explained by him. The fragment where the ring appears can arouse the readers' expectations.

Of course, for a web article writer, it’s good to do this once in a while to stretch out and catch up on reading.

It's still very derogatory to keep breaking the text like this, and it will make readers curse while reading.

After watching it once, I watched it a second time.

He still found a few places where he felt he was using too much force, and asked Chen Li to modify it.

These are all minor problems, and Chen Li solved them in a few minutes.

Seeing the efficiency of his revision, Yan Xin also confirmed that this guy really has writing ability, but he just went the wrong way.

This chapter was finalized, but Yan Xin did not ask Chen Li to publish it immediately.

The first chapter is currently under review, so there is no point in publishing the second chapter.

Moreover, the amount of updates to online articles is generally not large these days, especially for new books. There is no problem in updating a chapter.

Chapter 2 is right there.

Chen Li saw him yawning while talking, so he said:

"If you're sleepy, go back to sleep. I'll try to code two more chapters. You can come back to Palm Eyes after get off work tomorrow."

"Code two more chapters?" Yan Xin was startled, "It's already past three in the morning, and you still have to code two chapters. Are you going to die?"

Chen Li said with a smile: "Now I am very passionate about writing and in good condition. I can't sleep even when I go back. I might as well code two more chapters."

"Don't work so hard. Your brain can handle it, but your liver may not be able to handle it. We don't have to rush." ​​Yan Xin advised.

In his previous life, Yan Xin developed liver cancer because he delivered takeout every day until two or three in the morning. Over time, he developed liver cancer.

He didn't want Chen Li to become like this.

Chen Li disagreed. He was only twenty years old and in good physical condition. He didn't think that staying up late would make him sick.

However, he also knew that Yan Xin had good intentions, so he said: "Okay, I will code another chapter and then go back to rest."

He also added an explanation: "The main reason is that after listening to your words, I felt suddenly enlightened and inspired. It would be too uncomfortable not to write it down."

Yan Xin thought about it for a while, and with his hand speed, it took less than an hour to complete a chapter. It was past four o'clock when he finished coding, and he would go to work at three o'clock in the afternoon. He still had enough rest time, so he stopped trying to persuade him.

He couldn't hold on anymore and didn't want to hold on any longer, so he chose to go back to the dormitory to sleep.

The next day, it was already past eleven o'clock in the morning when he woke up, and he slept quite soundly.

When I got up, I saw that Chen Li was lying on the bed, fast asleep.

Seeing that it was already dinner time, he woke him up:

"Chen Li, it's time to get up and eat."

Chen Li woke up and looked particularly confused:

"What time will you call me?"

"At half past eleven, it's already dinner time. It's time to wash up and then go eat." Yan Xin said.

"Oh..." Chen Li responded.

He tried hard to open his eyes, but closed them again and said:

"I'm a little sleepy. I don't want to eat right now. You can go to the canteen and get me a meal. I'll eat later."

Yan Xin thought that this guy went to bed much later than him, and he might be really sleepy now, so he responded and went to wash his face and brush his teeth first.

When I came back, I saw Chen Li asleep again and snoring.

He shook his head and thought to himself: "This guy is working too hard."

I actually felt a little guilty.

I hope this book will become a big hit, otherwise I will really feel sorry for this young man.

I went to the cafeteria to eat. After eating, I signed for Chen Li and gave him a lunch box, indicating that I signed on my behalf.

When I returned to the dormitory with my lunch box, it was past twelve o'clock, and Chen Li was still fast asleep.

After waking him up and asking him to eat, Chen Li said, "Just leave it there, I'll eat it later," and then fell asleep again.

It seems that this baby is really exhausted.

Seeing Chen Li sleepy like this, Yan Xin felt embarrassed. He took out his notebook and thought hard about the classic Internet articles he had read over the years. There were some pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes that could be removed.

I got it from this book.

Not all cool scenes can be adapted, they still need to fit the character of the novel.

He has been reading online articles for several years, reading them in a daze, reading a lot, and remembering quite a lot of passages.

Now it’s time to filter out the content that can be transplanted.

How to transplant it and at which node it should be transplanted also requires careful thinking.

At around one o'clock in the afternoon, Chen Li finally woke up and saw Yan Xin writing and drawing with a notebook and asked:

"Brother, what are you writing?"

Yan Xin glanced at him: "I'm perfecting some details."

There is very little content in the notebook. A big plot that can accommodate dozens of chapters, and the key words written on the paper are only a few dozen words.

Most people can't understand it.

But Chen Li is the author of this novel, and he also heard Yan Xin explain the overall structure of the story, so he can understand it somewhat.

Although I don’t fully understand it, it feels very powerful.

There were other people in the dormitory, so it was not easy to discuss this matter. I just sighed in my heart:

"He already understands so much and works so hard. No wonder he has such a deep understanding of Internet writing! There are not so many Internet writing geniuses in this world. It's just that some people are working hard in places you can't see."

"I must write this novel well, otherwise how can I be worthy of the creativity he worked so hard to come up with."

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