Saint Seiya
Chapter 334: Finish this testimonial
I finally felt a sense of relief.
Other writers always say "my heart is a little empty" after writing a novel, but from this point of view, I don't have this idea yet.
Maybe the others haven't been edited yet.
To say something serious, in a word, it is to reopen two more volumes.
"The Myth of Hades" and "Golden Soul"
I originally planned to write chapters 1-250, and I didn't plan to write any more, but I didn't expect to write these two volumes after the theatrical version.
I'm so tired……
I wanted to give up many times in the middle, maybe because not many readers read it, and there were not many recommendations that made me want to give up honestly.
But there were still a few people who supported me, so I persevered.
Anyway, it's finally finished.
When I first started writing it in January 2013, I wrote it on a whim, thinking that it would be good if I wrote it myself.
Unexpectedly, I have been writing for several years and writing so many chapters.
Not to mention other aspects, I am still a little proud of this "word size". It is rare to see such a number of Saint Seiya doujinshi.
I don't know if you are happy to see it?
Then, the story about the "Myth of Hades".
I believe that many readers have noticed that at the beginning, it was linked according to the plot in "ND", and the power of "Kronos, the **** of time" was used to travel to the era of the previous holy war.
Following the opinions of readers, I have revised the writing style at the beginning of this article.
It was because of the influence of martial arts novels that I kept writing the style of "XX Dao: "". Now it looks like this style is really bad.
So, I went to read the light novels written by the Japanese, absorbed the characteristics of their writing, and made revisions from this one, and it was surprisingly easy to write. The article is also very clear to read, hey, I should have written this way at the beginning, I really regret it.
The Myth of Hades is just a side story. It only wrote about the previous holy war to destroy the "God of Time Cailos". Because of Yuxing's involvement in the world of Saint Seiya, Cailos has changed some practices in the past. If you leave it alone, the world will be in That era was over, and Chronos felt that he had to be stopped before Yusei could go to that era.
As an adult Yusei, it was easy to destroy him, so he agreed to do it, and at the same time wanted to use the power of the "Holy Sword" to gain the ability to "manipulate time".
As long as he learns this, he will not be afraid of any enemies in the future, and the Saint Seiya will not suffer the fate of perishing.
Then, he also succeeded in acquiring this ability.
On the other hand, they met Athena, the Pope, and the saints of their predecessors from the previous holy war, and followed the battle with Hades, the Four Dream Gods, the Twin Gods, and Hades, the Hades.
Seiya and the others, who have long become the "legendary saints", have a level of strength that is completely incomparable to that of their youth. They have also faced the power of God and overwhelmed them. I think they already have this value.
It is a power that can rival or even surpass God without the power of the "Holy Cloth".
When I finished writing the myth of Hades, some readers added my QQ and said that I was "very wonderful, and my writing has improved rapidly, which is completely different from before", I was really happy, and I thought that I didn't work in vain. field.
I can't say whether my writing is good or not, it's up to the readers to judge. Although everyone says it's good, I think it's far from enough.
No way, I'm not a great writer, I can't write that kind of descriptive words, maybe this is really my limit.
And then "Golden Soul"
That was to travel to another point in time after the continuation of the myth of Hades, and it also brought their future golden saints to this era.
When I first started, I really wanted to use Yusei as the protagonist and bring back the golden saints of the previous generation who died in the underworld to Asgard. However, in this way, many plots will become the same as the animation. At least the combat, language, and these must be imitated, which means that there is no modification. Everyone only needs to watch the animation, so I gave up.
Kronos used his power to take everyone through time and space to fight in this era. This is the history that the traveler Yuxing also knows. He used wisdom and led the golden people to fight against Andreas. I really like it. here.
Because many of the characters are newly written by me, I can try my best to use the lines. If it is the previous generation, there are many aspects that are not easy.
I also modified the Golden Soul while watching the animation, which took a lot of time. Basically, the plot here is what I came up with, and I didn't imitate the original work, so the readers seem to be quite different, which I think is more important.
I really worked hard to write this article, and the number of words is also large, which is even more difficult to write than the myth of Hades. The effect is still relatively satisfactory, and the dissatisfaction of the readers is basically very small.
Because the gold of this generation is too powerful, the battle with the **** fighters is basically one-sided, especially after the enchantment is destroyed, they restore their original strength, and they are almost abusing each other.
Not to mention the legendary Saint Seiya, it is an overwhelming advantage. Even Andreas and Loki can't please them when they meet them, not to mention the strongest protagonist.
I almost racked my brains about the battle of each article, until the inspiration disappeared, and sometimes I wanted to give up, but I continued to write after a few days. Personally, I am quite satisfied, although I don't know what the readers think about it.
After gaining the power of time, Yusei also played a role in this era. He healed the wounded and dead saints, and deprived the enemy of time. He was fooling the enemy with "time". When I was writing it, I did think it might not work.
Sure enough, some readers made comments.
It is said that the protagonist is too strong, Long Aotian, etc., I can only admit it calmly.
Maybe it was because I saw that the saints were abused so badly in the original work that I wanted to create a powerful protagonist. Maybe I did it subconsciously.
The protagonist of the later period does have the impression of being "too strong". Whether he is fighting or supporting on the battlefield, he has fully exerted his heroic skills. The activity of this "exceptional character" has attracted evaluations from both sides from the very beginning. Some people say they just read the beginning and don't watch it. There are also some people who want to see Shuangwen and continue to watch it, but they don't know if it makes them satisfied.
What gave me the most headaches was the plot of the battle, from the fight with the **** fighters after entering the world tree, as well as the battles with Andreas and Loki, they were all written for a long time.
There is a feeling of reaching the limit.
Since entering the Omega chapter, that is, more than ten years after the battle with Hades, the protagonist has not made many appearances, but even so, he is still the central character throughout the play. The role is given to the new generation of Saint Seiya and Seiya. I think it is better to write a novel in a comprehensive way. Although most of them don't have Yuxing's appearance, the most critical moment in the end is always him to defeat the final boss.
Maybe everyone is used to other novels with the protagonist in each chapter. Everything has the protagonist's writing style. My novel is special than others, that's all.
The plot I designed is actually very handsome and good-looking in my heart. I wonder if readers have the same mood as me. If I can add background music or something when reading it, I think it will be perfect.
Of course, that depends on everyone's imagination. It may also be my delusion, haha...
Then, yesterday came the final chapter of the Golden Soul "Time, engrave the golden legend of the future". I think this title is not bad, I changed it several times at first, and finally decided to use this one.
If someone asks if there is a plot that can surpass "Golden Soul", the level of excitement is still above.
I can definitely answer him: "Yes"
That's the "Pallas Arc" after my revision. From my point of view, it's better than the "Golden Soul", because I revised it a lot, especially the battle with the Four Heavenly Kings.
Finally, a revised version is already underway.
I have revised more than 100 chapters in the first 1-250. In short, there are still many unfinished revisions. I have no time to revise. It is really annoying to work every day, and I am tired after writing for a while after returning home.
Like chapters 1-52 of the Galactic War, I rely on it. It turns out that my writing was so bad before, it was really messy, I edited it so much that I was ashamed of myself, and I thought it was well written for such a bad article.
That is the plot in the early stage, so for readers who are used to the fighting style in the later stage, compared with the high-quality battles and dialogues like "Pluto Myth" and "Golden Soul", the early stage seems a little monotonous and boring, at least I think so. , everyone will think so after watching it.
There is no way, even if I am a great writer, I can't write anything that can match these two articles. Let's take a look at it when the time comes. I can only do my best to change it, the effect is definitely not as good as the later period.
It will be uploaded on June 1st, maybe about seven chapters will be updated a week, not every day, it depends on the progress of my writing.
Fast words will be there every day or even two or three chapters at the end, but that will be a few months later.
If you are interested, you can add my QQ: 527234272
Express your opinion, I see if I can write it into the revised article to satisfy you. I also like to chat with others about Saint Seiya.
However, if you insult me, no matter what, there has been such a person before.
The revision of the Galactic War is also quite large. The subsequent Nordic, Neptune, Pluto, Mars and New Zodiac chapters basically just changed the writing style and added some dialogues. There are big changes, and only a little bit.
Alas, doing this every day feels like my lifespan will be shortened, lack of sleep, etc. There are many problems.
There will be no new books in the future. Writing books is really tiring. After completing the revised version, my novel career should be over.
Fill all the pits, I'll rest, thoroughly...
Then say goodbye to everyone.
Author: even me
May 20, 2016.
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