Saint Seiya
Chapter 335: final testimonials
The "Pallas Arc" has finally been updated today, which means that the book is over.
Are you happy?
I am still very confident about the plot of this article, and I feel that it is more exciting than the content of other articles. Whether it is Yuxing or Seiya, they are quite active.
Is the "modified version" still better? It must be much better than the original version, as many readers have told me. Not only did it change the writing style, but the content was also revised a lot. Of course, many of them remained unchanged, and it was impossible to revise them all. After all, there were so many chapters, and I didn't have the energy to rethink them.
In short, I will take off the wonderful parts, but write some new plots of my own, and the final degree of completion is still very good in my opinion.
The "Pallas Chapter" is longer than any of the previous ones, and the number of words in each chapter in the later stage is also quite large. When I was revising it, I really had a hard time writing it, and I felt like I couldn't support it.
However, I still finished it. This is the first one I started to work on after the end of "Golden Soul", which was faster than "Galactic War".
The five Seiya became Golden Saints and they all gathered in this "Pallas Arc". In a sense, I feel very moved. Ikki didn't join the ranks at the beginning, but I changed this in the revised version. .
Maybe it was influenced by "Pluto Myth ND".
However, among the five, I think the most handsome one is undoubtedly "Purple Dragon".
Because there are original works for reference, in fact it is not very difficult to write, and his activeness in guarding Palaestra is unmatched by others. Those chapters have also been revised a lot compared to the original, and the strength shown against the carved fighters also shocked the enemy.
Since the death of Xuanwu in the original work was quite a blow to me, I had already chosen Zilong in the original setting, and then in order to strengthen their strength, they would be the apex of the legendary Saint Seiya King's Landing.
No, even in order to make up for the regrets on the original work, there are many things in Toei's Omega chapter that are really unsatisfactory, and the benefits are given to the new generation of Guangya and them, making them the shadows under the light. I'm not happy.
I thought about the battle and dialogue in this article for a long time before writing it. It is really difficult, but it is still quite good to read. The style of my writing is very different from the fan fiction written by the public, which is written by the Japanese. The novel came out in the same style.
Saint Seiya is a Japanese work, I think it may be better to write it according to the writing method of Japanese novels. Of course, I also wrote it because I liked it.
I don't know what other people think, but anime fangirls are the best, at least I'm satisfied.
The biggest difference between the Pallas Arc and the original version is that Yuxing and the others have traveled through time to the past era, which is a story that unfolded after "The Myth of Hades" and "Golden Soul".
Yusei gains the power of the **** of time, and is it a bit foul to freely use time to fool the enemy? The left hand has the ability to cast complete immortality on the army. Would it be too much to restore the wounded, or resurrect the dead, to make the Saint Seiya an undead legion?
Of course, my own subjective opinion is very good, and I don't know what readers think.
Yusei's right hand deprives the enemy of time, and the ability to destroy the enemy one by one is beyond the specification. If you can imagine it, you will definitely think that he is very handsome.
The warrior army called him "Cronos", the incarnation of the **** of time and feared him.
Sorry, I really can't think of a good name to come up with.
So it can only be named as such.
In the later stage, the battle with the Four Heavenly Kings has also been revised a lot.
For example, the battle between Ikki, who became the golden saint of Leo, and Agaion, the first-class fighter, rounded out the duel in the original work. But the content is obviously still different, and there are many things in the original work that are not found in the battles and dialogues.
Gallia's opponent was Endymio, and of course he was the one who defeated him in the end. Even if Sheehan and Ameruda helped, it was Endymio who ended up taking it down. It's different from the last shot by Seiya in the original version, so maybe this is the best.
The battle between Zilong and Hyperion basically hasn't changed much. I wanted them to fight one-on-one because I really couldn't stand the powerlessness of Zilong in the original work. In my novel, he can rival the Four Heavenly Kings. A Saint Seiya, whose strength is completely comparable to that of the No. 1 warrior, Hyperion.
The first battle between Seiya and Titan is also very different from the original work. Seiya also used the unique trick from Sisyphus in the mythology of Pluto. I only wrote it because I thought it was more handsome. It may be a little out of place, but it doesn't seem too much. awkward. (Saint Seiya has too few tricks)
Shun and Europa, Glacier against Mira, "Legendary Saint VS Saturn's Confidant" should also be quite good. They brought out the characteristics of Virgo and Aquarius, and then first rubbed them and then used the biggest Power to end the opponent, the victory or defeat may be easier than the battle with the Four Heavenly Kings, but will everyone feel very cool?
At least I don't like Europa and Mila myself, it's also very pleasing to me that they end up like this.
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The biggest difference in "Pallas Arc" is the addition of the "Sacred Clothes" setting. There is no such thing in the original work. I don't know why Toei didn't do this setting. I also watched "Golden Soul". I just added it to the modified version, and the effect looks good. Increases the value of the Golden Saint in one go.
However, unlike the "Golden Soul", it is impossible to change into a sacred garment in this era, because the original did not have it, so I added my own idea, that is, the change of the sacred garment after the fusion with the power of the universe cannot be changed. Become a sacred garment.
Of course, there is no explanation in the original work, it is purely my own idea.
If unlimited can be used, it is a bit foul. Therefore, the general golden saint can only change in an instant, and the ultimate move released is only once. People who have higher than their small universe, such as Seiya and the others, can last for five minutes, which is better?
Yuxing became the golden saint of Ophiuchus and it has not changed, because the update of the comics is too slow (currently only Ophiuchus Palace appears in the Sanctuary, the characters are not yet there) and there is nothing worth referring to, and I can't write about Ophiuchus. Exactly what kind of power will be possessed, only to fight Saturn as the armor worn by Yusei.
Is that enough?
I don't know what kind of sky-defying ability Ophiuchus has, but Yu Xing's ability is enough to defy the sky.
Well, that's fine.
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Finally, I myself would like to say something.
Ever since I started writing the novel "Saint Seiya Yusei", my setting was destined to be different from the people I've done so far. There is no harem, nor YY novels, purely orthodox saint fighters. I also don't want to jump out of the original too much, because the plot will be messy to write.
I don't like mess.
It seems simple enough to understand.
Almost no novel can be written like me, no, it should be said that the style is close. There are basically no pure saint fighters. The protagonist I wrote is not the kind of man who likes to have a harem with women. From beginning to end, he only loves Saori.
Even so, he would never have a relationship with her when he was a saint.
I think the protagonist I created is quite successful, and the characteristics of other characters I can't say are perfect, but they are also very close to the original. I don’t think the language can be sloppy. You have to understand the character and then reproduce what he might say. If you scribble it casually, it always feels like no matter which character is speaking, it feels like the same person is speaking.
And the dialogue in the original work is necessary to a certain extent, so my novel also has exactly the same lines, which is really impossible, the plot needs.
As long as it does not exceed too much, it should be proved in the revised version, right?
- As for the travel star.
Truly an outrageous character.
It is a fact that he has had unparalleled power from the moment of his debut, and even so, it is considered to be the level of Seiya's strength in the later stage.
Of course, the power of the "Contractor" does not count.
The plot of the revised version has undoubtedly changed a lot, and the style of my writing has also become the style of Japanese light novels. Probably few people write in this way in China, but I still use this way of writing.
After all, this is a work created by the Japanese.
The novel is over, and I hope that readers who have finished reading it can write their own evaluations. I don't expect everyone to like it, and there must be some who don't like it.
This is normal.
After all, it's really hard to be perfect.
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--finally
I remember when I first wrote this novel in late 2012. At that time, I wrote the first few chapters, and it was not officially written until 2013. After that, it was only by the end of 2014 that the "Pallas" was finished.
On January 19, 2015, I started uploading on Qidian Novel.com, which also happened to be my birthday. Of course, I did this on purpose.
It was a meaningful day after all.
After that I also wrote the novels "The Myth of Hades" and "Golden Soul".
I thought I would stop writing the Pallas chapter, but I ended up writing it anyway.
However, what I can't believe the most is that I still started to revise the version from the beginning to the end. This process is really hard. It took me more than a year to complete more than 400 chapters.
I am a social person, and I also have to work. Of course, it is impossible to be in front of the computer every day, so of course the revision is slow.
But it all adds up, and it has taken me more than four years from when I first wrote this novel to today.
It's not that I'm arrogant, it's really not easy.
After all, a word count of more than 1.7 million is rare in the fandom world. I just wrote it for my interest and didn't need any benefits, nor did it mean that. For me, it is enough for everyone to be happy, and the rest is not important.
Although the result after writing did not become a popular novel, the popularity was very dim. (I am still getting hit) Everyone seems to be very uninterested in the orthodox Saint Seiya fans. Those who jump out of the original work, or those who add YY from the harem, are more popular. I have long understood that.
Well, I'm not that type.
You can chat with me if you have an opinion, but hopefully you will be a gentleman.
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--Then
For the past two years, I have often wondered, does it really make sense to write this book?
When I started writing it, it was purely out of interest, but then I felt lost.
To say why, it's because I spent too much time on this novel.
In the past four years, I feel that time has been lost from me in vain. The past four years have really been meaningless for me. I wasted my best time when I was young. For the past two years, I have been regretting it.
Maybe it's because of the people around you.
Many of my friends, most of them are married and have children. I am still alone, and I don't even have a girlfriend. My parents often say that it brings me a lot of pressure.
- I'm not really happy at all.
This idea pops up in my head all the time.
My life was wasted in a lot of my stupidity. This is something that I have been worrying about in my heart for the past few years. I often think "it would be nice if I could go back to when I was 20 years old".
There is a saying that goes well.
"It's better to regret after doing it than to regret not doing it."
There are too many things I haven't tried, and I feel inferior in society. Although I may think too much, I feel that I can't keep up with others.
I was in a lot of pain, not knowing how to live my life.
Alas, to be complaining like this here, I must be declaring my dissatisfaction with wasting so much time with this novel. I also admit that, in fact, that is the case.
- I'm so sorry!
It's not that I regret writing the novel, it's that I wasted a lot of time writing it. But in the final analysis, it was because of my own stupidity that I failed to grasp it properly.
I knew that, but I couldn't stop this novel, so I insisted on finishing it.
I think that no matter what happens in the future, writing this novel will have a great impact on my life, and I will probably never forget it.
Dear friends who write novels, I hope you will cherish your time.
Don't let yourself regret it.
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"Saint Seiya" is all over today, I have filled all the pits, even if there will be a new Saint Seiya series in the future, I will not write again.
This time it's really closed.
Next month, I will also be celebrating the twenty-fifth year of my life. Starting from 2017, I have also vowed to start a new life. I feel that I cannot continue like this, because time is really gone forever.
The front of my life is still dark, and I plan to find the light. It may not be a smooth road, but I must go on.
——In order to pursue his little happiness.
I have to change.
Goodbye, readers.
Author: even me
December 12, 2016.
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