When I Asked You To Write About Struggle, You Wrote About Being A Failed Art Student?

In the room.

Fang Yuan continued writing…

【Hitler’s love of painting was innate】

【He has never received any systematic professional art education, but he is so obsessed with it.】

【Alois was furious:”Painter? No! Not as long as I’m alive!”】

【They had numerous quarrels over this.】

【But no one could convince anyone.】

【The turning point came when Hitler was 14 years old】

【His father died】

【This time, no one could stop Hitler from pursuing his dream.】……

Painter? No! Not as long as I live!

Then……

Hitler’s father died.

When seeing this scene, countless viewers were stunned for a moment.

……

——”Oh, this?……Father offering sacrifice to heaven?”

——”This player is really good!”

——”I thought Hitler would fight back and finally convince his father to let him learn painting…….It turned out to be such a magical development?”

——”66666!”

——”Kennedy: Alois, have you heard my story?”

——”The story of Kennedy? What does that mean? Isn’t that the former president of the United States?”

——”Don’t the people above know this? Kennedy once said that as long as he was alive, China would not be able to build an atomic bomb. As a result, he died in 1963, and our atomic bomb exploded successfully that year. Hahaha!”

——”There is such a thing? 66666!”

——”Isn’t Hitler’s father the second Kennedy? As long as he is alive, Hitler can’t learn to paint, and then he will die, haha”

——”This player is awesome! Could this plot design come from this?”……

The audience was amused by Fang Yuan’s”plot setting”. Several guests in the studio also found it very interesting…….

Jiang Wen laughed

“Although the tone of the story is common, the little innovation of this player is very good.”

“He did not use the inherent process of arguing, fighting, and persuading to help the protagonist break the current predicament.”

“Instead, the protagonist’s father was killed directly.”

“Yeah, that’s interesting.”……

Jiang Wen gave a thumbs up to this design.

He was able to think of such a unique way to promote the plot.

It can be seen that contestant No. 111 still has ideas…….

However, this does not mean that Jiang Wen is optimistic about Fang Yuan.

If he wants to make this story stand out, this alone is not enough.

If he continues to create the next story with the classic Hollywood process, it can only be considered acceptable at best, not even”excellent”, let alone”amazing”.

So, how will it develop next?

Jiang Wen is very curious…….

【The death of his father eliminated all obstacles for Hitler in his painting career.】

【After his father’s funeral, he dropped out of high school and returned home.】

【He paints during the day and goes to the theater at night.】

【Live an idle life all day long】

【At the age of 17, he decided to go to Vienna to apply for the Academy of Arts.】

【In 1906, when he said goodbye to his hometown and rushed to the capital, he would not have thought that Vienna would change everything.】……

Fang Yuan stopped writing here.

He looked at the computer screen.

His thoughts seemed to have drifted back to Vienna in 1906.

He began to think about how to tell the story of Hitler in Vienna…….

How to express it?

If this part of the plot is filmed into a movie.

If it is to be expressed in a clichéd way.

Then the shot here should be like this:

In the afterglow of the setting sun, the train blew its whistle, slowly started, and rushed towards the sunset at the end of the railway with billowing black smoke.

The setting sun in the distance is the only light source in the picture.

And as the train rolls forward.

The darkness continues to surge and erode from the right side of the picture, and finally swallows up the setting sun.

The camera is focused on the wheels of the train.

The subtitles appear: The wheels of history roll forward.

And as the darkness completely dominates the entire screen.

The magnificent Vienna opens from behind the darkness…….

Vienna would change Hitler.

It was very important.

And what happened here was even more important.

Fang Yuan began to think about how to describe how Hitler was changed here.

After thinking for a moment, he said to himself:

“Got it!”

His sight refocused.

Fang Yuan placed his hands on the keyboard again…….

【Vienna, the world-renowned music capital】

【At the same time, it is also the center of luxurious life.】

【There are many mansions in the city, and banquets with huge sums of money are held every day.】

【Thanks to the wealth left by his father, Hitler lived a luxurious life.】

【So in his eyes, all he could see of Vienna was a splendid, prosperous, and extravagant city.】

【He liked to wear fancy clothes in the evening and go to the theater to watch Wagner’s plays.】

【Wagner is a German composer in the European Romantic period and an indispensable figure on the German opera stage.】

【Hitler loved this German composer as much as he loved Germany.】

【”When I heard Wagner’s music, I seemed to hear the melody of a world that had passed away.”Hitler later recalled】

【Most of the heroes in Wagner’s works are outsiders who dare to challenge the old order, or pure saviors.】

【In his musical world, there are gods and heroes, struggle and sacrifice, victory and death…….】

【This was very attractive to Hitler.】

【He admires heroes and at the same time, he also begins to desire to become a hero.】

【at the same time】

【Wagner’s anti-Semitism and nationalism also subtly influenced Hitler.】……

In 1906, at the age of 17,

Hitler loved reading.

He read about German history and German mythology.

Coincidentally,

Wagner was a German.

His works contained a lot of history about the glorious period of the Germanic nation.

This had a strong appeal to Hitler.

And coincidentally,

Wagner was also an anti-Semite and a nationalist.

It is not difficult to imagine how much impact this would have on a 17-year-old boy who had a strong love for Germany and the Germanic nation. A seed of anti-Semitism was sown.

……

Studio.

When seeing this part,

Jiang Wen frowned.

“What’s the meaning?”

“”Did it go off topic?”

He was a little confused.

According to a normal story, after arriving in Vienna, shouldn’t it be about how Hitler learned to paint and how he started a new life here?

However, according to the standard development process of film and television stories, he should have failed very quickly.

Shouldn’t this be about how Hitler was full of confidence and how he failed?……

“There was no problem in the previous paragraph”

“It tells how he indulged in pleasure in Vienna, the music capital. It was a normal development, but it also laid the groundwork for his future failure.”

“But what does the latter part mean?”

At this time,

Jiang Wen did not understand it at all.

It was the latter part about Hitler being influenced that was the key point!