Fox in the Penalty Area

In the recent update, some readers complained that it was too watery, and some people said that the seven chapters of a game have not been finished, so it is necessary to write ten chapters

Regarding these complaints, I really want to complain and go back. Please, write ten chapters, or even more than ten chapters. The competition is an important competition, and of course I have to write in detail. I have written countless games in this book, and there are also those games that are written in one or two chapters, and even several games are written in one chapter, so they are not written in detail? All plots have a length, a capacity, and a rhythm?

Is that called writing?

That's called a running account!

If I write every game in ten chapters and eight chapters, I will admit that I am inferior. Can't write about important games in detail? Is there such a reason? Who is writing this book? Who is controlling the rhythm of the storyline?

My book has always followed this rhythm. Important games must be written in great detail, covering every aspect of the game. Whether it's this game, or those important games before.

After all, if I take an important match in one stroke, what kind of important match is it? So some people started watching Fox of the Box directly from this game? Haven't read more than three million words before?

I thought I’ve said this kind of question many times. When you read the book and see this, those fans are all readers of the rudder master, at least they all book the chapters, and they should be very clear about the rhythm and habits of my book, no Will chatter on this issue.

Unexpectedly, as long as there is a long competition, there will be some "shuishuishui" voices from time to time:

I started to write about Hu Lai's first game in the Premier League before the game, and some people called it "water".

I also wrote in great detail about the last game of Hu Lai's Chinese Super League championship.

I prepared so long before Hu Lai's East Asian Cup match against the South Korean team. Some people say that the water is flooding.

There are also many important games that I have spent a lot of time and space describing that are called water by you. When I look back now, I still feel that the writing is very good:

Full of emotions, full of emotions, well-prepared, full of sense of picture, full of sense of presence, people have a sense of being there. I watch it now, no matter how many times I watch it, I will still be infected by the description in it. .

These are all shaped by the words and space that are considered "water".

When writing that the protagonist didn't score a goal in the game, some people said it was water.

Write the protagonist does not match some people say water.

Write supporting roles, not protagonists, some people say water.

Shape the opponent, perfect this virtual world and some people say water.

Explain that I have said it too many times before, making me look like a Xianglin sister-in-law, but I can’t help it. If I don’t come out and explain when I see someone talking about water, it seems that I acquiesced in their eyes, and it seems They are right. So the next time when there are many chapters written in such an important competition, someone will jump out and talk about it.

I don't remember explaining it specifically before

I really don’t want to explain it every time, after all, it wastes my time and affects my writing mood.

At the same time, it also affects everyone's mood of reading. After all, everyone talks about money. Some people always say water, and the rhythm will really be brought up. And those readers who don't feel water will also be affected by the mood of reading, and may even cause quarrels in the discussion area.

So as long as I see something that says water, I will delete it. Feel sorry.

Anyway, you all told me to read it, and I deleted it when I saw it. There is no need to keep it to affect everyone's mood and start a war.

I have written this book until now, and it takes more than ten hours to write two chapters a day, so I can say with conscience that every word in this book is not watery, and every word has its existence Value and significance, every sentence has my thoughts buried in it, some people can't see it, it doesn't mean that those words are meaningless and not nutritious.

Although it is superficial, I don’t need to search for information like the previous books, but to build a world out of thin air, I also need to draw materials from reality, and I need to integrate the knowledge I have mastered before, and finally make this fictional world enough. believable.

I put a lot more thought into this book than the previous ones, and I believe those readers who read it carefully will also be able to feel it.

I always think that the author's greatest sense of accomplishment comes from the fact that his little thoughts hidden between the lines can be perceived by readers and resonate.

In other words, there is a tacit understanding between the author and the reader.

If there is no tacit understanding, you can only see "water" "big water" and "big water" from the thousands of words I wrote with bald hair, "Then I'm sorry, you are not the target audience of this book, why torture yourself?

Of course, I also know that if I have ten shifts a day, even if I really flood the water, I am afraid that few people will really say that I am full of water. After all, "the amount is large and the tube is full", what bicycle do you need? But I'm sorry that I can't do it. It's not that I don't bother to do it, but that I really can't write so many words.

Important games often require an emotional outburst at the end, but the last week really makes the reader's emotions inconsistent. But what to do?

It took me less than a day to write the chapters.

So when you see an important game, those who want to read it in one go, save it. Wouldn’t it be good to watch it after saving a game?

If you are impatient and want to watch it at the first time, then you should be more patient. I have neither a studio nor a codeword program, nor do I have superhuman powers, nor can I achieve the selfless state of not caring about worldly affairs. All I have is my hands. Speed, and as the age increases, the speed can only become slower and slower, and it is impossible to reverse the growth.

So just endure it, or save it.

Don't just go to this chapter and yell "water". After you yell, you won't let me update faster, and I won't immediately change the content after that. I will still stubbornly follow my own rhythm. Write.

In the end, I also saw someone say that Lin Hai started pouring water like crazy in the later stage, and it has become a habit. Sorry, I have only written half of this book, and I haven't entered the later stage yet, so I disappointed you.

A book with a volume of at least 6 million words, a key match that determines whether Hu Lai can win the first Premier League championship, writing ten chapters, 30,000 words, accounting for 100% of the total words is not enough ? Very incomprehensible?

During the Qidian annual meeting, I stayed up late in the hotel room for three consecutive days to code, and I swiped to the background to talk about this chapter. I really couldn’t complain, so I wrote these complaints, which can be regarded as my "confession".

Please forgive my emotional outburst if I have offended you.