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After sighing, Yang Qiming came to Li Bo's office again.

"Lao Li, how do you feel about this chapter?" Yang Qiming asked.

Li Bo nodded and said: "Yes, very good. Even Genghis Khan appeared. Gu Yong really dared to think and write, and he also had enough writing power. Before this, I was worried that he would collapse later, but after reading the third chapter After that, my worries decreased.”

When Yang Qiming heard what Li Bo said, his face looked very proud. His previous feeling was indeed correct.

Just as he was about to say something, he heard Li Bo continue: "However, I discovered another problem."

"Another question?" Yang Qiming glanced at Li Bo doubtfully and said, "What question? Lao Li, come and listen."

Li Bo said: "This work is a martial arts work, but judging from the first three chapters, the martial arts elements seem to be missing. Except for the description of Qiu Chuji and the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan, there are not many martial arts elements.

This third chapter is almost all about the description of the war between the various tribes in Mongolia, as well as the conflicts and frictions between the Temujin tribe and the envoys of the Jin Kingdom, with very few martial arts elements.

Moreover, it seems that the protagonist Guo Jing will grow up in Temujin's army. So, the main thing he came into contact with and learned should be the routines of marching and fighting in the desert, and there seemed to be no martial arts elements.

Of course, I'm not saying that writing like this is not good. In fact, with ancient writing skills, writing like this will definitely be very exciting.

But this is martial arts after all, and the martial arts elements are the most important. Otherwise, it would be more like a historical piece. "

After listening to Li Bo's words, Yang Qiming nodded and did not refute, but smiled and said: "I said, Lao Li, you are good at picking problems. Judging from the first three chapters, this is indeed a problem. However, this is It’s just the third chapter, don’t worry, I believe this will be a genuine martial arts film.”

Li Bo also smiled and said: "I don't mean to find fault, but our requirements must be strict. You are right. This is only the third chapter. I hope that the rest will be as you said."

Yang Qiming nodded and said: "Let's see what happens in Chapter 4 in a few days. To be honest, I'm looking forward to it. I like this work more and more."

Li Bo added: "To be honest, I am also looking forward to it. I also like this work a little now."

"Oh, really?" Yang Qiming laughed, and then went out, feeling very good.

After Yang Qiming went out, Li Bo smiled and shook his head, seeming to be in a good mood.

…

Judging from the first three chapters of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, its martial arts elements do seem to be somewhat lacking, especially from the third chapter and the development trends derived from the third chapter.

The people who noticed this were not just Li Bo, but also Wang Yang, the editor-in-chief of the Great Martial Arts Magazine, as well as martial arts writers Luo Ye Wusheng, Wo Long and others, as well as other people who were good at thinking and had vicious eyes.

Great Martial Arts Magazine.

Jian Yishen said excitedly: "Editor-in-Chief, it is indeed true. Looking at the first three chapters, there are not many martial arts elements. If you didn't tell me, I wouldn't have noticed it."

Wang Yang smiled and said: "I didn't pay attention to it before. I suddenly discovered this after reading the third chapter, which almost describes the war between Mongolian tribes."

Jian Yishen said: "I hope Gu Yong doesn't realize it himself. After he unknowingly writes this work more like history, if he wants to focus on martial arts again, the transition will definitely be very blunt. It’s not natural. Then this work is naturally over.”

Wang Yang nodded and said: "That's true. Moreover, he has also brought Genghis Khan and Mongolia into the mix, and the pattern has become larger, and it will undoubtedly become more difficult to control. Therefore, this work of his now seems to be a success. Infinite, but in fact, if these two hidden dangers are buried, it may overturn at any time. "

"That's true." Jian Yishen said, becoming more and more excited the more he thought about it.

…

In the communication group of Luo Yewu Sheng, Da Dali Bisha, Crescent Moon, and Qinsheng.

Luo Ye said silently: "As soon as the third chapter comes out,

First of all, it is undoubtedly very exciting. But there seems to be another hidden danger. What do you think? "

He said vigorously: "Hidden dangers are indeed hidden dangers, but it is too early to say anything now. This is only the third chapter. We must read a few more chapters before we can draw a conclusion."

Crescent Moon said: "It's true that we can't draw a conclusion now. Let's read the next chapter. However, I, Gu Yong, should not make such a mistake."

Qin Sheng said: "Let's not talk about other things. The score list will be updated this afternoon. I hope this hidden danger will stop the score of Legend of the Condor Heroes from continuing to rise, and it will also allow us to bring the score closer."

"I hope so." Luo Yewusheng, Dali Bisha, and Crescent Moon said at the same time.

…

Not only Luoye Silent People, but almost everyone was waiting for the update of the scoreboard in the afternoon.

Of course, in addition to being most concerned about the ratings of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, everyone is also concerned about the ratings of works by Dali Bizhi, Mengyue, Qinsheng, Shang Buer and others.

Martial arts fans are very happy after seeing the updates of several people’s works today. Even though it's not as exciting as The Legend of the Condor Heroes, it's still very good.

In the past, if you only got one, everyone would be very excited.

The official rating list update did not keep everyone waiting for too long.

However, all the martial arts fans were stunned after seeing the latest score list.

The score of Legend of the Condor Heroes has not changed, it is still 73 points from the previous issue.

What's happening here? The third chapter, which was so burning and exciting, even summoned Genghis Khan, did not improve the rating of Legend of the Condor Heroes.

Martial arts fans couldn’t believe it.

"Has the rating list not been updated yet?" someone asked.

"No, it has indeed been updated. You can see that the score of Blood Wind Chime by Dali Dashi has increased from 67 points in the previous issue to 68 points now. In addition, the works of Crescent Moon and Qin Sheng have also increased by 01 points each. "

The rating list has indeed been updated, but why has the rating of The Legend of the Condor Heroes not changed?

No one doubted whether there was a system failure, and no one suspected that The Legend of the Condor Heroes had suffered injustice.

After all, it is the Times Literature Award jury, and the outside world absolutely believes in its fairness and impartiality.

The only explanation is that the Times Literature Award jury believes that the serialization of this issue of Legend of the Condor Heroes is not enough to improve its rating.

But why? Is the vision of the Times Literature Award jury so "unique"?

Many martial arts fans are confused about the situation.

…

I recommend a friend’s book God-level Flowers of the Other Side, which is also an urban book. The author thinks it is very good.

In addition, the author is not allowed to tell you that the author of that book is an absolutely beautiful college student.

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